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Requesting Research Access to the London Library: IELTS formal letter sample

An IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 formal letter with a Band 8 sample answer, why it scores well and the phrases worth borrowing for your own letter writing.
  • 193 words
  • Formal letters
  • Request
  • 20 minutes

The task

You are going to travel to London for about one week and spend two days visiting the London Library. You are studying for a project and want to do some background studies.

Write a letter to the head of the library. In your letter:

  • →explain what your project is about?
  • →say what studies you want to do at the library?
  • →say what facilities you need to use?

Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear ...,

Model answer

Band 8 sample letter

Band 8193 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.

Dear Mr. Henderson,

I am writing to inquire about the possibility of accessing the London Library for two days during my upcoming visit to the city from the 12th to the 19th of October. I am currently an academic researcher and would greatly value the opportunity to utilize your institution's extensive collections.

My project focuses on the socio-economic evolution of Victorian-era urban planning. Specifically, I am examining how municipal infrastructure policies influenced residential development patterns in London during the late nineteenth century. This research is intended for a forthcoming publication on historical urban geography.

To support this work, I wish to conduct background studies focusing on primary source archives and rare period journals held within your stacks. Gaining access to these specific historical documents is essential for verifying my current hypotheses regarding local architectural shifts.

Regarding facilities, I would require a quiet workspace with reliable Wi-Fi and access to your document scanning equipment to digitize relevant excerpts for further analysis. Please advise if a temporary visitor pass is available and what documentation I should provide to facilitate this arrangement.

Thank you for your time and assistance with this request.

Yours sincerely,

Julian Thorne

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Examiner's view

Why this scores well

This letter achieves Band 8 by maintaining a consistently professional tone and clearly addressing all three bullet points with specific, relevant details. A common mistake for Band 6 candidates is failing to explain the research project clearly, instead providing vague descriptions that do not justify the need for specialized library access.

  • →Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
  • →If you know the person's surname, use Dear Mr or Ms and close with Yours sincerely.
  • →No contractions, no slang; polite indirect requests such as I would be grateful if you could.

6 phrases

Useful phrases from the letter

  • inquire

    to ask for information from someone officially

  • extensive

    covering a large area or having a wide range

  • socio-economic

    relating to the interaction of social and economic factors

  • primary source

    original materials from the time period being studied

  • hypotheses

    proposed explanations made on the basis of limited evidence

  • facilitate

    to make an action or process easier to perform

Frequently asked questions

Is this letter formal or informal?+

Formal. Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.

How many words should an IELTS General Training letter be?+

At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

What does the examiner look for?+

This letter achieves Band 8 by maintaining a consistently professional tone and clearly addressing all three bullet points with specific, relevant details. A common mistake for Band 6 candidates is failing to explain the research project clearly, instead providing vague descriptions that do not justify the need for specialized library access.

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