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Percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia 2007 and 2010: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 pie chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about pie charts.
  • 182 words
  • Pie charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The charts below show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Electricity consumption in Eastern Australia 2007 (%)
  • Transport: 1%
  • Residential: 28%
  • Commercial: 23%
  • Agriculture: 1%
  • Mining: 9%
  • Aluminium: 13%
  • Manufacturing: 13%
  • Other metals: 12%
View the data
CategoryValue (%)
Transport1
Residential28
Commercial23
Agriculture1
Mining9
Aluminium13
Manufacturing13
Other metals12
Electricity consumption in Eastern Australia 2010 (%)
  • Transport: 1%
  • Residential: 28%
  • Commercial: 23%
  • Agriculture: 1%
  • Mining: 9%
  • Aluminium: 11%
  • Manufacturing: 9%
  • Other metals: 18%
View the data
CategoryValue (%)
Transport1
Residential28
Commercial23
Agriculture1
Mining9
Aluminium11
Manufacturing9
Other metals18

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8182 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The two pie charts illustrate the distribution of electricity consumption across various sectors in Eastern Australia during the years 2007 and 2010. Overall, the data indicates that while most sectors maintained consistent energy usage, the industrial landscape underwent significant changes over the three-year period.

In both years, the residential sector was the largest consumer of electricity, accounting for 28% of the total, followed by the commercial sector at 23%. Minor sectors, including transport, agriculture, and mining, remained unchanged, contributing 1%, 1%, and 9% respectively throughout the period. These five categories collectively represented 62% of electricity consumption in both 2007 and 2010.

Conversely, the industrial sectors showed marked fluctuations. In 2007, manufacturing and aluminium each accounted for 13% of consumption, while other metals made up 12%. By 2010, the proportion of electricity used for other metals rose significantly to 18%. In contrast, the share for manufacturing dropped to 9%, and aluminium consumption also saw a decline, falling to 11%. These shifts suggest a reorganisation of industrial energy priorities within the region, despite the overall stability observed in the majority of the other sectors.

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Pie charts

How to write about pie charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview.
  • →Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority.
  • →With two pies, compare the same slice across both.
  • illustrate

    to show or demonstrate something using visual aids

  • distribution

    the way in which something is shared or spread

  • accounted for

    to make up a particular amount or proportion

  • fluctuations

    irregular rising and falling in number or amount

  • conversely

    introducing a statement that reverses a previous one

  • stability

    the state of being unlikely to change much

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While electricity consumption in the residential, commercial, transport, agriculture, and mining sectors remained stable, there were notable shifts in the industrial sectors, particularly a rise in other metals and a decline in manufacturing and aluminium.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe pie charts?+

Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview. Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority. With two pies, compare the same slice across both.

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