Academic Writing Task 1 · line graph

Average monthly price fluctuations for copper, nickel and zinc in 2014: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 189 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Average monthly change in prices of copper, nickel and zinc (2014) (%)
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  • Copper
  • Nickel
  • Zinc
View the data
JFMAMJJASOND
Copper210.50.5-0.5-0.51110.50.51.5
Nickel64110.5-3-1-1-1-211
Zinc1321.51-1-0.5-0.5-0.5-11.52

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8189 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates the average monthly percentage change in the prices of copper, nickel, and zinc throughout 2014. Overall, nickel experienced the most significant volatility throughout the year, while copper and zinc showed more moderate fluctuations in their monthly price changes.

Nickel began the year with the highest growth at 6% in January, followed by a steady decline to 1% by March. After remaining stable at 1% in April and 0.5% in May, nickel prices plummeted to a low of -3% in June. Although there was a slight recovery to -1% between July and September, prices dipped further to -2% in October before rebounding to 1% in November and December.

In contrast, copper started at 2% in January and gradually decreased to -0.5% by May and June. From July to September, copper prices stabilised at 1% growth, before experiencing minor fluctuations between 0.5% and 1.5% for the remainder of the year. Zinc followed a similar pattern to copper, peaking at 3% in February. It then trended downwards, reaching a low of -1% in June and October, before finishing the year with a strong recovery to 2% in December.

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How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • volatility

    the tendency of prices to change very rapidly

  • fluctuations

    irregular rising and falling in number or amount

  • plummeted

    decreased rapidly and suddenly to a lower level

  • rebounded

    rose again after having fallen in value

  • stabilised

    became unlikely to change or fluctuate significantly

  • trended

    developed or changed in a general direction

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, nickel experienced the most significant volatility throughout the year, while copper and zinc showed more moderate fluctuations in their monthly price changes.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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