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Overseas visitors to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 183 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Overseas visitors to the UK by purpose (1989-2009) (millions)
02468101989199119941996199920012004200620092011
  • Business
  • Holiday
  • Meeting Friends and relatives
View the data
1989199119941996199920012004200620092011
Business544.566.56.577.587
Holiday6.56.589876.5789
Meeting Friends and relatives3.544.34.555.566.576.2

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8183 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates the number of overseas visitors arriving in the UK for three distinct purposes—holiday, business, and visiting friends or relatives—between 1989 and 2009. Overall, it is clear that all three categories experienced growth throughout the period, although holiday travel remained the most popular choice for the majority of the timeframe.

In 1989, holiday travel began at 6.5 million, which was the highest figure among the three. This number climbed significantly to reach a peak of 9 million in 1996, before experiencing a period of fluctuation and dipping to 6.5 million in 2004. Subsequently, it recovered to reach 9 million again by 2011. In contrast, business travel started at 5 million in 1989, dropped to 4 million by 1991, and then followed a steady upward trajectory, peaking at 8 million in 2009 before declining to 7 million.

Visiting friends and relatives was the least common reason for travel throughout the period. Starting at 3.5 million in 1989, this category saw consistent growth, reaching 7 million by 2009, before experiencing a slight decline to 6.2 million by the end of the period.

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How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • fluctuation

    irregular rising and falling in number or amount

  • upward trajectory

    a steady path of increasing over time

  • distinct

    clearly different or of a different kind

  • peak

    the highest point reached by a value

  • dipping

    a brief or temporary fall in amount

  • consistent

    acting or done in the same way over time

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, all three categories of visitors showed an upward trend over the period, with holiday travel remaining the most popular purpose for the majority of the time.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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