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A breakdown of drinking habits among different age groups in America: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 179 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph gives information about the drinking habits of the US population by age.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Drinking habits by age (US) (%)
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  • Heavy Drinker
  • Light Drinker
  • Ex-Drinker
  • Never Drinker
View the data
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Heavy Drinker625460555243
Light Drinker865102341
Ex-Drinker253323201711
Never Drinker57121585

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8179 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the distribution of four distinct drinking habits across six age brackets in the United States. Overall, it is evident that the majority of the population identifies as heavy drinkers, particularly among younger cohorts, whereas light drinking is most prominent in the oldest age group.

Heavy drinkers constitute the largest segment in every category, peaking at 62% for those aged 16-24. While this proportion fluctuates, it generally trends downwards as age increases, reaching a low of 43% among individuals aged 65-74. Conversely, the proportion of light drinkers starts at a mere 8% for the youngest group and remains low until age 55, after which it rises sharply to 41% for the 65-74 age bracket.

Regarding ex-drinkers, the highest percentage is observed in the 25-34 age group at 33%, before gradually declining to 11% for the oldest cohort. Finally, the never-drinker category remains relatively small throughout, peaking at 15% for the 45-54 age group. In summary, while heavy drinking is the dominant habit across the US, there is a clear shift towards light drinking as people age.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • prevalent

    widespread or common in a particular area

  • cohort

    a group of people with shared characteristics

  • fluctuates

    rises and falls irregularly in number

  • prominent

    important, noticeable, or standing out clearly

  • distribution

    the way in which something is shared

  • bracket

    a range or group of similar values

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

The data indicates that heavy drinking is the most prevalent habit across all age groups, although its popularity declines with age, while light drinking becomes significantly more common among older demographics.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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