Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Average daily car journeys into the city centre from 1996 to 2005: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 179 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Car journeys into the city centre (Average number of journeys per day)
02,0004,0006,0008,00010,0001996199719981999200020012002200320042005
  • Residents
  • Non-residents
View the data
1996199719981999200020012002200320042005
Residents9,8009,2009,8009,5005,0004,5005,0003,9003,5004,000
Non-residents5,0006,0006,5008,2007,8008,0008,1003,0003,2004,900

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8179 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the daily average of car journeys made by residents and non-residents into the city centre between 1996 and 2005. Two major policy changes, the introduction of parking meters in 2000 and the closure of Westgate Street and Park Lane in 2003, are highlighted as key events.

Initially, resident journeys were high, peaking at 9,800 in 1996 and 1998. However, following the introduction of parking meters in 2000, this figure plummeted to 5,000. By 2005, resident journeys had further decreased to 4,000. Conversely, non-resident traffic showed an upward trend from 5,000 in 1996 to a peak of 8,200 in 1999, remaining relatively stable until 2002.

A dramatic shift occurred in 2003, when the closure of specific streets led to a sharp decline in non-resident journeys to 3,000, while resident journeys also fell to 3,900. By 2005, both groups saw a slight recovery, with non-resident journeys rising to 4,900 and resident journeys reaching 4,000. Overall, the data indicates that both policy interventions were effective in reducing the total volume of daily car traffic entering the city centre.

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Bar charts

How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • plummeted

    experienced a very sudden and steep downward trend

  • conversely

    used to introduce a contrasting or opposite situation

  • fluctuated

    changed frequently and irregularly in a specific range

  • upward trend

    a general direction of growth or increase over time

  • stable

    remaining relatively constant without significant change or movement

  • volume

    the total amount or quantity of something measured

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, the number of car journeys by residents declined significantly over the period, while non-resident traffic fluctuated before dropping sharply following the closure of city centre streets.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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