Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Expenditure on three categories among different age groups in the UK 2004: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 185 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004 (%)
0510152025Under 3031-4546-6061-7576+
  • Food and drink
  • Resturant and Hotel
  • Entertainment
View the data
Under 3031-4546-6061-7576+
Food and drink613172023
Resturant and Hotel14121227
Entertainment78142313

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8185 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of total spending allocated to food and drink, restaurants and hotels, and entertainment across five distinct age groups in the UK in 2004.

Overall, food and drink expenditure rises steadily with age, whereas spending on restaurants and hotels is highest among the youngest group and declines significantly for older residents. Entertainment spending shows a more varied pattern, peaking in the 61-75 age bracket.

Regarding food and drink, the proportion of spending increases consistently from 6% for those under 30 to a peak of 23% for residents aged 76 and over. Conversely, expenditure on restaurants and hotels is most significant for the under-30 group at 14%, before fluctuating and dropping to a low of 2% for the 61-75 age group, with a slight recovery to 7% for the oldest cohort.

In terms of entertainment, spending starts at 7% for the youngest group and rises to 8% for those aged 31-45. This figure continues to climb, reaching 14% for the 46-60 group and peaking at 23% for those aged 61-75, before falling back to 13% for residents aged 76 and above.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • allocated

    distributed or assigned for a particular purpose

  • steady

    regular, even, and continuous in development

  • fluctuating

    rising and falling irregularly in number or amount

  • proportion

    a part, share, or number considered in comparative relation

  • cohort

    a group of people with a shared characteristic

  • conversely

    introducing a statement that reverses a previous one

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, food and drink expenditure rises steadily with age, whereas spending on restaurants and hotels is highest among the youngest group and declines significantly for older residents.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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