Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 190 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity: 2010 (%)
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  • Male
  • Female
View the data
15 to 2425 to 3435 to 4445 to 5455 to 6465 and over
Male52.842.239.543.145.146.7
Female47.748.952.553.35347.1

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8190 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females across six age brackets who engaged in regular physical activity during 2010. Overall, it is evident that women were more active than men in the majority of age groups, whereas men only recorded higher participation rates in the 15 to 24 age category.

In the youngest group (15 to 24), men were the most active, with 52.8% participating, compared to 47.7% of women. However, this trend reversed significantly in the subsequent age groups. For individuals aged 25 to 34, female participation rose to 48.9%, while male activity dropped to 42.2%. This gap widened further among those aged 35 to 44 and 45 to 54, where female participation peaked at 52.5% and 53.3% respectively, while male figures remained lower at 39.5% and 43.1%.

Regarding the older population, women aged 55 to 64 maintained a higher activity level at 53%, compared to 45.1% for men. Finally, in the 65 and over category, the participation rates for both genders converged, with 46.7% of men and 47.1% of women engaging in regular physical activity, representing the most balanced figures across all age groups.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • proportion

    a part, share, or number considered in comparative relation

  • engaged in

    participated or became involved in a particular activity

  • subsequent

    coming after something in time or following order

  • widened

    became larger or broader in extent or range

  • converged

    came together from different directions to meet somewhere

  • balanced

    kept in a steady position with equal proportions

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, women generally participated in more regular physical activity than men across most age groups, with the exception of the youngest cohort.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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